Naroghin's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Piano Lesson 1]

Well,

there are a lot of great ideas here, but it seems you need to develop the ideas you have, then move more smoothly between them. It also seems as though you could have led up to the end a little better.

However, all of that said, it was an excellent first try at piano writing, especially for not having dynamics or other completed parts yet.

Teenplayer84 responds:

Thanks...

That's what my sister said too..it didn't flow well (Music Major)

Haha..i guess i need to work on it more later...

[[8-bit Memories]]

Pretty good,

especially for a first in this style. It was simple, yet smooth and elegant in how it was written. Good build and climax, as well as a fun little surprise at the end. Good job, it was a treat to listen to.

Sup3rSloth responds:

glad you liked it!
thanks :D